Ben,
I think you have to be more daring, although beautiful in tone I felt it was too close to the awful music that you get on Fashion T V that seems to make all fashion look like soft porn.( which is another topic worthy of some debate.)
Stir it up a bit!

Hi there,
Thanks for your constructive criticism i am new to writing music for this sort of project and i did think along the same lines as you do when it comes to, "The Fashion TV sound." I am currently working on the London fashion week highlights and will take in mind what you have suggested and be more daring. Check back on Friday and i will post up the link for the London highlights and see if it has had a better daring outcome!

Thank you!

Ben.